Writing headlines is a specialty - there are outstanding writers who will tell you they couldn't write a headline to save their lives.
Nothing is more effective than sincere, accurate praise, and nothing is more lame than a cookie-cutter compliment.
I caution against beginning or ending a quotation with ellipses.
A harsh reality of newspaper editing is that the deadlines don't allow for the polish that you expect in books or even magazines.
If any sort of error is inexcusable, it's an incorrect phone number. One of the cardinal rules of copy editing is that every phone number published must be checked.